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Q: When you were a kid, What did you want to be when you grow up?
A: When I was kid, I wanted to be a teacher in elementary school when I grow up.
Because I thought teaching somebody knowledge is a productive behavior.
And teachers have the responsibility to guide their students onto the right path.
I thought guiding students onto the right path is very great job.
So, teacher is a charming job but a difficult job.
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Good Morning, Cute [이름]!
Hearing your cute voice makes me really happy!
You have a very cute and innocent voice. :)
Take care!
-T.Faye
Q: When you were a kid, What did you want to be when you grow up?>> CORRECT:A: When I was kid, I wanted to be a teacher in elementary school when I grow up.>> CORRECT:Because I thought teaching somebody knowledge is a productive behavior.>> Because I thought teaching is a productive behavior.And teachers have the responsibility to guide their students onto the right path.>> CORRECT:I thought guiding students onto the right path is very great job.>> I thought guiding students onto the right path is a very great job.So, teacher is a charming job but a difficult job.
>> So, teacher is a charming job but difficult.
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