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2015-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Q: When you were a kid, What did you want to be when you grow up? A: When I was kid, I wanted to be a teacher in elementary school when I grow up. Because I thought teaching somebody knowledge is a productive behavior. And teachers have the responsibility to guide their students onto the right path. I thought guiding students onto the right path is very great job. So, teacher is a charming job but a difficult job.

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Good Morning, Cute [이름]! Hearing your cute voice makes me really happy! You have a very cute and innocent voice. :) Take care! -T.Faye   Q: When you were a kid, What did you want to be when you grow up?>> CORRECT:A: When I was kid, I wanted to be a teacher in elementary school when I grow up.>> CORRECT:Because I thought teaching somebody knowledge is a productive behavior.>> Because I thought teaching  is a productive behavior.And teachers have the responsibility to guide their students onto the right path.>> CORRECT:I thought guiding students onto the right path is very great job.>> I thought guiding students onto the right path is a very great job.So, teacher is a charming job but a difficult job. >> So, teacher is a charming job but difficult.

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