Homework

No worries, [이름]!

I do understand. I am proud of you because you are working hard.

And you also find time to take our class. Keep it up!

I hope that your enthusiasm will continue until the end.

I\'m sorry to hear about what happened to your father\'s business.

But the good thing is, even though you had difficulties at first.

You were able to succeed. ^^ That\'s an inspiring story. ^^

Have a great day. Thanks for attending our class today.

Teacher Nina

Hello, Nina!
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How are you today?
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My customers visited our company yesterday, so I attended a meeting and did a lot of tasks.
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>> My customers went to our company so I attended a meeting and did a lot of tasks yesterday.
They are German, so we talked in English.
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I was very tired and I had a bad headache^^
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>> I was very tired and I had a terrible headache.
I will attend a meeting tomorrow, they will stay and work for this week in my company.
>> I will attend a meeting tomorrow, they will stay and work in my company for a week.

>> I will attend a meeting tomorrow, they will work in my company this week. 

My homework is as follows.

If you could edit your memories, which ones would you erase and why?

Wow, if it happens I will be very happy.
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When I was a young(Maybe I was eleven years old), my father business collapses.
>> When I was young, I think I was about eleven years old, my father\'s business was bankrupted.

>> When I was young, about eleven years old, my father\'s business closed.
We were in serious debt because his business collapsed.
>> Did you mean: We had a lot of debts because of what happened.
My father conducted a ship business, one of them sank to bottom of the sea.
>> My father was in a shipping business, one of the ships sunk.
When accident happend, my relative on the paternal side shined on my family and pretend not to know us.
>> When the incident happened, my relatives on the paternal side pretended not to know us.

>> When the incident happened, my relatives were ashamed of us and pretended not to know us.
So I would like to erase this memory.
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But my father overcomed and he successes his business.
>> But my father overcame the problems and he succeeded in his business.
Thank you for your feedbacks.
>> Thank you for feedback.

Talk to you soon.

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Have a nice day^^

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