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A blessed Tueseday, too. Jessie!
I'm also very happy that you're grateful about what I always attend a class. I'm alwyas trying to improve my skill. Of course I agree that the truth I'm always trying to participate a class means that I'm eager to learn. I'm looking forward to see you again tomorrow. Take care always!
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I haven't thought about when I'll cry. And I can't find some special reasons for it. Instead, I'll cry when my family passes away like other people do, I guess.
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Hello there [이름]!
Thanks for the composition.
I think you really can\'t think of things that will make you cry. Hahahha
Anyway, thanks for still trying. See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
A blessed Tueseday, too. Jessie!
>> A blessed Tuesday, too. Jessie!
I\'m also very happy that you\'re grateful about what I always attend a class.
>> I\'m also very happy that you\'re grateful that I always attend our class.
I\'m alwyas trying to improve my skill.
>> I\'m always trying to improve my skill.
Of course I agree that the truth I\'m always trying to participate a class means that I\'m eager to learn.
>> Of course I agree about the truth that I\'m always trying to participate in our class means that I\'m eager to learn.
I\'m looking forward to see you again tomorrow.
>> I\'m looking forward to seeing you again tomorrow.
Take care always!
>> Correct!
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I haven\'t thought about when I\'ll cry.
>> Correct!
OR>> I haven\'t thought about the situations or things that can make me cry.
And I can\'t find some special reasons for it.
>> Correct!
Instead, I\'ll cry when my family passes away like other people do, I guess.
>> I think I\'ll cry when a member of my family passes away like other people do, I guess.
Thanks for the composition.
I think you really can\'t think of things that will make you cry. Hahahha
Anyway, thanks for still trying. See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
A blessed Tueseday, too. Jessie!
>> A blessed Tuesday, too. Jessie!
I\'m also very happy that you\'re grateful about what I always attend a class.
>> I\'m also very happy that you\'re grateful that I always attend our class.
I\'m alwyas trying to improve my skill.
>> I\'m always trying to improve my skill.
Of course I agree that the truth I\'m always trying to participate a class means that I\'m eager to learn.
>> Of course I agree about the truth that I\'m always trying to participate in our class means that I\'m eager to learn.
I\'m looking forward to see you again tomorrow.
>> I\'m looking forward to seeing you again tomorrow.
Take care always!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I haven\'t thought about when I\'ll cry.
>> Correct!
OR>> I haven\'t thought about the situations or things that can make me cry.
And I can\'t find some special reasons for it.
>> Correct!
Instead, I\'ll cry when my family passes away like other people do, I guess.
>> I think I\'ll cry when a member of my family passes away like other people do, I guess.
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