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2015-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What usually makes you feel and think negatively? I always try to feel or think positively but of course I have some situations that makes me think negatively. I guess that when I fail something or when the things can not be managed by myself. Especailly, when I fail the test or interview, it really makes me small and think negatively. Later on, I blame myself over and over. It is hard to escape from that kind of darkness. I really need someone to get me from that moment. That is why, I try to keep making myself better so that I won't have this kind of feelings.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

Well, thinking negatively would really make you think about yourself that you are a loser.

But it is not a good way of course.

And we should find a way to revert this negative thinking.

Thanks for your time for today!

Have a great day!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


What usually makes you feel and think negatively?

I always try to feel or think positively but of course I have some situations that makes me think negatively.

>> correct!

>> or: I am always trying to feel or think positively but of course there are some situations which would make me think negatively.

 I guess that when I fail something or when the things can not be managed by myself.

>> I guess that when I fail on something or when there are things which I could manage.

Especailly, when I fail the test or interview, it really makes me small and think negatively.

>> correct!

Later on, I blame myself over and over.

>> correct!
 It is hard to escape from that kind of darkness.

>> correct!

I really need someone to get me from that moment.

>> correct!

That is why, I try to keep making myself better so that I won\'t have this kind of feelings.

>> correct!

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