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Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
Well, thinking negatively would really make you think about yourself that you are a loser.
But it is not a good way of course.
And we should find a way to revert this negative thinking.
Thanks for your time for today!
Have a great day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What usually makes you feel and think negatively?
I always try to feel or think positively but of course I have some situations that makes me think negatively.
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>> or: I am always trying to feel or think positively but of course there are some situations which would make me think negatively.
I guess that when I fail something or when the things can not be managed by myself.
>> I guess that when I fail on something or when there are things which I could manage.
Especailly, when I fail the test or interview, it really makes me small and think negatively.
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Later on, I blame myself over and over.
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It is hard to escape from that kind of darkness.
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I really need someone to get me from that moment.
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That is why, I try to keep making myself better so that I won\'t have this kind of feelings.
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