Homework

Hello, teacher Marrie. I didn't Know that you checked my homework, yesterday. So I didn't say 'Hello'. Sorry about that.^^ Below is today's homework. Write a pitch for a new blockbuster movie. Explain what will happen in the movie and why it will draw crowds to the theater. Lately, I saw a movie with my son. It's title is 'Night at the Museum: Secret of the Tomb' which is the third film of the 'Night at the Museum' series. In this movie, a lot of exhibits become alive at night because of a magic tablet. It is expected that many children love this film in their winter vacation. At the position of parents, it is also educational since there are lots of historical information.

Hi Kaylee! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I have never seen this movie, albeit I saw the first one in the series. Since you wrote such a good recommendation here, I will try to watch it. :) Your writing skills are pretty good. You just need to take note of the proper punctuation and capitalization. Keep up the good work!   Please review the corrections below.   Ciao!   ~Teacher Marie~    Hello, teacher Marrie.>> CORRECT! >> Hello, Teacher Marie. :) I didn\'t Know that you checked my homework, yesterday. >> CORRECT! >> I didn\'t know that you checked my homework yesterday.   So I didn\'t say \'Hello\'.>> CORRECT! Sorry about that.^^ >> CORRECT!   Below is today\'s homework.>> CORRECT! Lately, I saw a movie with my son.>> I recently saw a movie with my son. It\'s title is \'Night at the Museum: Secret of the Tomb\' which is the third film of the \'Night at the Museum\' series.>> CORRECT! >> It\'s -- Its In this movie, a lot of exhibits become alive at night because of a magic tablet.>> In this movie, a lot of exhibits came to life at night because of a magic tablet. It is expected that many children love this film in their winter vacation.>> Since it is winter vacation, it is expected that a lot of children would love this movie. At the position of parents, it is also educational since there are lots of historical information. >> From the parents\' point of view, it is quite educational since there are lots of historical information in it.