homework
학생이 쓴 원문
yesterday, I was that I wanted to say.
"Income deduction" T.T
Before working now I'm I worked to fashion stylist.
I majored in fashion in university.
I like drawing, very much.^^
Separated from their parents and live alone. ^^
how about you?
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Give some 5 examples of adverbs and use them in a sentence.
ex)
1, i'm very happy.
2, now and forever love you
3, i'm in my office now.
4, where are you?
5, I’ll be back soon.
kk
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you today? I read you message. It is so sad that you live alone.
You mentioned that you majored in Fashion so I believe that you are
good at designing and fashion. I like fashion! ^^ I really do. kk
By the way, please study your corrections below, okay.
Take care! ^^
See you^^
~~Teacher Kris
yesterday, I was that I wanted to say.\"Income deduction\" T.T
>>What I wanted to say yesterday was Income Deduction.Before working now I\'m I worked to fashion stylist.
>> Before working, I worked as a fashion stylist.I majored in fashion in university.
>> CorrectI like drawing, very much.^^
>> CorrectSeparated from their parents and live alone. ^^
>> I am seprated from my parents and I live alone.how about you?>> How about you?1, i\'m very happy.
>> I\'m very happy.2, now and forever love you
>> I love you now and forever.3, i\'m in my office now.
>> I\'m in my office now.4, where are you?
>> Where are you?5, I’ll be back soon.
>> Correct
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