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2015-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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yesterday, I was that I wanted to say. "Income deduction" T.T Before working now I'm I worked to fashion stylist. I majored in fashion in university. I like drawing, very much.^^ Separated from their parents and live alone. ^^ how about you? HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Give some 5 examples of adverbs and use them in a sentence. ex) 1, i'm very happy. 2, now and forever love you 3, i'm in my office now. 4, where are you? 5, I’ll be back soon. kk

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you today? I read you message. It is so sad that you live alone. You mentioned that you majored in Fashion so I believe that you are good at designing and fashion. I like fashion! ^^ I really do. kk By the way, please study your corrections below, okay. Take care! ^^ See you^^   ~~Teacher Kris     yesterday, I was that I wanted to say.\"Income deduction\" T.T >>What I wanted to say yesterday was Income Deduction.Before working now I\'m I worked to fashion stylist. >> Before working, I worked as a fashion stylist.I majored in fashion in university. >> CorrectI like drawing, very much.^^ >> CorrectSeparated from their parents and live alone. ^^ >> I am seprated from my parents and I live alone.how about you?>> How about you?1, i\'m very happy. >> I\'m very happy.2, now and forever love you >> I love you now and forever.3, i\'m in my office now. >> I\'m in my office now.4, where are you? >> Where are you?5, I’ll be back soon. >> Correct

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