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2015-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Hi Faye! I'm glad for you to like my voice~! Talking with you at morning makes me high,too. I want to speak english fluently but now I'm yet. I'm keeping on try. <Homework> Q : If you could try out any job for a day, what would you like to try? Why? A : If I could try out any job for a day, I'd like to try a singer. Actually I can't sing well but I love singing and dancing. Since I was young, I have been really interested in the music and have adored singers. I think the music is the best teraphy for all people and a singer is an attractive job. I want to learn playing the piano and singing in the academy, but now I don't have any time. I'm planning that I go to the music academy in about 3 months.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Very good! You accomplihed all of your homework! Happy Thursday! -T.Faye   Hi Faye! >> CORRECT:I\'m glad for you to like my voice~! >> I\'m glad that you like my voice~!Talking with you at morning makes me high,too. >> Talking with you in the morning makes me energetic,too.I want to speak english fluently but now I\'m yet.>> I want to speak English fluently but now I can\'t yet. I\'m keeping on try. >> I\'ll keep on trying.<Homework>>> CORRECT:Q : If you could try out any job for a day, what would you like to try? Why?>> CORRECT:A : If I could try out any job for a day, I\'d like to try a singer.>> If I could try out any job for a day, I\'d like to try to be a singer.Actually I can\'t sing well but I love singing and dancing.>> CORRECT:Since I was young, I have been really interested in the music and have adored singers.>> Since I was young, I am really interested in music and have adored singers.I think the music is the best teraphy for all people and a singer is an attractive job.>> I think music is the best theraphy for all people and being a singer is an attractive job. I want to learn playing the piano and singing in the academy, >> I want to learn playing the piano and singing in the academy, but now I don\'t have any time.>> CORRECT:I\'m planning that I go to the music academy in about 3 months. >> I\'m planning to go to the music academy for about 3 months.

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