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if you could try out any job for day, what would you like to try? why?
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If I get the job for a day, I will become an interviewer.
I wonder the people’s idea, what are they want? What are they think about their life?
I want to interview the normal people.
That means, we can find easily people around the ourlife.
For example, i can meet some people at the café that I go to often.
I want to meet a lot of people and talk to them about their life.
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Good Morning, [이름]!
How are you?
Why did you hold your class yesterday?
What happened?
I hope you\'re fine.
-T.Faye
if you could try out any job for day, what would you like to try? why?>> If you could try out any job for day, what would you like to try? why?==============================================================If I get the job for a day, I will become an interviewer.
>> If I get the job for a day, I will to be an interviewer.I wonder the people’s idea, what are they want? What are they think about their life?
>> I wonder people’s idea, what are they want? What are they think about their life?I want to interview the normal people.
>> I want to interview ordinary people. That means, we can find easily people around the ourlife.
>> That means, we can easilyfind people around our life.For example, i can meet some people at the café that I go to often.
>> For example, I can meet some people at the café that I visit often. I want to meet a lot of people and talk to them about their life.
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