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2015-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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if you could try out any job for day, what would you like to try? why? ============================================================== If I get the job for a day, I will become an interviewer. I wonder the people’s idea, what are they want? What are they think about their life? I want to interview the normal people. That means, we can find easily people around the ourlife. For example, i can meet some people at the café that I go to often. I want to meet a lot of people and talk to them about their life.

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Good Morning, [이름]! How are you? Why did you hold your class yesterday? What happened? I hope you\'re fine. -T.Faye   if you could try out any job for day, what would you like to try? why?>> If you could try out any job for day, what would you like to try? why?==============================================================If I get the job for a day, I will become an interviewer. >> If I get the job for a day, I will to be an interviewer.I wonder the people’s idea, what are they want? What are they think about their life? >> I wonder people’s idea, what are they want? What are they think about their life?I want to interview the normal people. >> I want to interview ordinary people. That means, we can find easily people around the ourlife. >> That means, we can easilyfind people around our life.For example, i can meet some people at the café that I go to often. >> For example, I can meet some people at the café that I visit often. I want to meet a lot of people and talk to them about their life. >>CORRECT:

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