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2015-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Nothing is more important to a country’s future than education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? yes, i agree that education is important to a country's future truely. Since the termination of the war,the Korea war, Our ancestor tried to develop a economy of a country.They thought that education is one way of developing a economy. a coulpe of year from that day, economy of korea have grown rapidly. i think that it is to edcation that korea's economy has been developing. That is to say, it is within bounds to say that education is necessary to a country's future.

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Yes, you are right! I remember what Arnold Schwarzenegger once said “You know, nothing is more important than education, because nowhere are our stakes higher; our future depends on the quality of education of our children today.” Well, I strongly agree with this too. Anyway, have a good evening dear. Just have fun for now. -Teacher Chloe Nothing is more important to a country’s future than education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?yes, i agree that education is important to a country\'s future truely. >>Yes, I agree that education is important to a country\'s future. Since the termination of the war,the Korea war, Our ancestor tried to develop a economy of a country. >>Since the terminaion of the Korean war, our ancestors tried to develop our country\'s economy. They thought that education is one way of developing a economy. >>They thought that education is one of the ways to develop our economy. a coulpe of year from that day, economy of korea have grown rapidly. >>Couple years from that day, the economy of South Korea have grown rapidly. i think that it is to edcation that korea\'s economy has been developing. >>I think it is education that keeps our economy from developing. That is to say, it is within bounds to say that education is necessary to a country\'s future. >>In conclusion, I can say that education is necessary to a country\'s future.

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