Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie
I was pleased to speak with you again.
Have a nice day! Teacher Marie
Do you think our society is too dependent on technology like smartphones? Why or why not?
It is true that our society get to rely on technology and automation.
Nowadays smartphones especially have changed peopel's life dramatically.
Based on my experience, they help us acquire knowledge more easily.
Moreover we can do that job with no barriers of time and space.
However, it would be a big problem that we couldn't do anything without smartphones.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! It was a delight speaking with you too. I had a good time during our class. :) Thanks for answering your homework. Now I can see how good your writing skills are. You are indeed a writer! ^^ Keep up the good work!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Hello, Teacher Marie!
I was pleased to speak with you again.
>> CORRECT!
Have a nice day! Teacher Marie
>> CORRECT! OR >> Have a nice day, Teacher Marie!
It is true that our society get to rely on technology and automation.
>> It is true that our society relies on technology and electronic devices.
Nowadays smartphones especially have changed peopel\'s life dramatically.
>> Nowadays, smartphones have changed people\'s lives dramatically.
Based on my experience, they help us acquire knowledge more easily.
>> CORRECT!
Moreover we can do that job with no barriers of time and space.
>> Moreover, we can do that without any limit in time and space.
However, it would be a big problem that we couldn\'t do anything without smartphones.
>> However, it would be a big problem if we couldn\'t do anything without smartphones.
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