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2015-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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what's one of your favorite questions to ask mew friends or to get a conversation going? ================================================================== actually, i didn't forget the questions to other people that means, i realized what i don't interesting life of other people. i became remote person. when i went to universty, i liked to make a questions to my friend. are you happy ? or what are you have a dream? that time, many friends told me of their dream. what they do their best that they get the happiness. recently, i don't have a detailed plan for my life. this homework was concerned my life and dream.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Happy Friday! What are your plans for the week? Are you going out of town? I hope you\'ll have a good one. -T. Faye   what\'s one of your favorite questions to ask mew friends or to get a conversation going?>> What\'s one of your favorite questions to ask mew friends or to get a conversation going?==================================================================actually, i didn\'t forget the questions to other people>> Actually, I didn\'t forget the questions whenever I\'m with other people.that means, i realized what i don\'t interesting life of other people.>> That means, I realized what I am not interested for in life of other people.i became remote person. >> I became a remote person.when i went to universty, i liked to make a questions to my friend.>> When I went to the University, I liked to make a questions for my friend.are you happy ? or what are you have a dream? >> Are you happy? What are your dreams?that time, many friends told me of their dream.>> That time, many friends told me of their dreams.what they do their best that they get the happiness. >> They told me that, whenever they do their best, it makes them happy.recently, i don\'t have a detailed plan for my life. >> Recently, I don\'t have a detailed plan for my life.this homework was concerned my life and dream. >> This homework affects my life and dream.

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