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2015-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello, Jessie! I'm really happy that you're thinking like that. I'll always do my best as possible as I can. Let's keep it up! I"m really grateful to you. <Essay (the last class)> The most striking way that the government helps disabled people is, I think, to discount the prices especially in public things like a public transit. And they have a benefit to park. There's a handicapped parking spot and only disabled people can use. <Essay> My favorite song is 'Undisclosed desire', song by Muse. I like that song's lyrics and mood. Particularly I like a little dreaming, silent mood and rhydme. Actually I love almost all Muse's songs, but I like it most.

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Good moning [이름]! Wow! I checked the time you sent your homework and it\'s 3:55 am. Is that the reason why you couldn\'t wake up in time for our class?Hahaha! Anyway, thanks for still doing your homework. Keep it up [이름]! See you on Monday! ~T. Jessie~ Hello, Jessie! >> Correct!I\'m really happy that you\'re thinking like that. >> Correct!I\'ll always do my best as possible as I can. >> I\'ll  do my best as often as possible. OR>> I\'ll always do my best. Let\'s keep it up! >> Correct!I\"m really grateful to you.>> Correct!<Essay (the last class)>The most striking way that the government helps disabled people is, I think, to discount the prices especially in public things like a public transit. >> The most striking way that the government helps disabled people is, I think, to discount the prices especially in public facilities like a public transit. And they have a benefit to park. >> And they have another benefit at the park. There\'s a handicapped parking spot and only disabled people can use.>> There\'s a handicapped parking spot and only disabled people can use it.<Essay>My favorite song is \'Undisclosed desire\', song by Muse. >> My favorite song is \'Undisclosed desire\', sung by Muse. I like that song\'s lyrics and mood. >> Correct!Particularly I like a little dreaming, silent mood and rhydme. >> Do you mean: I particularly like the little dreamy, silent mood and rhythm. Actually I love almost all Muse\'s songs, but I like it most. >> Correct!OR>> Actually I love almost all of Muse\'s songs, but that is my favorite.  

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