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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Jessie!
I'm really happy that you're thinking like that. I'll always do my best as possible as I can. Let's keep it up! I"m really grateful to you.
<Essay (the last class)>
The most striking way that the government helps disabled people is, I think, to discount the prices especially in public things like a public transit. And they have a benefit to park. There's a handicapped parking spot and only disabled people can use.
<Essay>
My favorite song is 'Undisclosed desire', song by Muse. I like that song's lyrics and mood. Particularly I like a little dreaming, silent mood and rhydme. Actually I love almost all Muse's songs, but I like it most.
강사 첨삭
Good moning [이름]!
Wow! I checked the time you sent your homework and it\'s 3:55 am.
Is that the reason why you couldn\'t wake up in time for our class?Hahaha!
Anyway, thanks for still doing your homework. Keep it up [이름]!
See you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
Hello, Jessie!
>> Correct!I\'m really happy that you\'re thinking like that.
>> Correct!I\'ll always do my best as possible as I can.
>> I\'ll do my best as often as possible.
OR>> I\'ll always do my best.
Let\'s keep it up!
>> Correct!I\"m really grateful to you.>> Correct!<Essay (the last class)>The most striking way that the government helps disabled people is, I think, to discount the prices especially in public things like a public transit.
>> The most striking way that the government helps disabled people is, I think, to discount the prices especially in public facilities like a public transit.
And they have a benefit to park.
>> And they have another benefit at the park.
There\'s a handicapped parking spot and only disabled people can use.>> There\'s a handicapped parking spot and only disabled people can use it.<Essay>My favorite song is \'Undisclosed desire\', song by Muse.
>> My favorite song is \'Undisclosed desire\', sung by Muse.
I like that song\'s lyrics and mood.
>> Correct!Particularly I like a little dreaming, silent mood and rhydme.
>> Do you mean: I particularly like the little dreamy, silent mood and rhythm.
Actually I love almost all Muse\'s songs, but I like it most.
>> Correct!OR>> Actually I love almost all of Muse\'s songs, but that is my favorite.
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