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Happy Friday and good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
Well, I am really hoping that you wished would come true.
Really. Cross fingers.
Anyway, thanks for these past few days that you have been with me and I hope that you will have a nice weekend.
Enjoy your weekend and take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you could have three wishes that would come true, what would they be? (No, you can’t wish for more wishes)
If I could have three wishes that would come true, first, I wish my parents\'s health.
>> correct!
I hope that they live long time with me.
>> I hope that they would live longer with me.
second, my nephew can see.
>> Second, that my nephew would be able to see.
I am so worried about his future and how hard his life.
>> I am so worried about his future and how hard his life could be.
I wish that he can see even a little.
>> correct!
Lastly, I could provide big place for my puppies so that they could feel free.
>> Lastly, I could provide a big place for my puppies so that they could feel free/ roam freely.
I hope that there wishes come true.
>> I hope that these wishes would come true.
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