Homework

Hello, Teacher Marie! Today is our 4th class. I'm happy that I am familiar with speaking English. Of course, I'm not satisfied with my speaking level yet. But I expect good results in someday future. Have a happy weekend! Imagine that a big new department store is being built in your hometown. Do you support this development or not? I disagree building a big new department store in my hometown. There are already two sizable departments here. Adding a shopping centerinduces traffic jam in this site. It's another problem that the construction makes alot of dust and noise. To wit, extra development in my neighborhood has several negative effects whereas it has few positive effects.

Hi Kaylee! I\'m glad that you are being optimistic about our English classes. That is the right attitude! Improvement doesn\'t happen overnight, so you have to work extra hard and be patient. :) Thank you for writing this wonderful composition. You did very well here. However, I would advise you to use a more common expression or phrase instead of \'to wit\'. This phrase is primarily used in legal texts and speech, so unless you\'re going for a formal tone,  you can replace \'to wit\' with namely, specifically, in other words, more precisely, or to clarify.   Ciao!   ~Teacher Marie~   Hello, Teacher Marie!>> CORRECT! Today is our 4th class. >> CORRECT!   I\'m happy that I am familiar with speaking English.>> CORRECT! Of course, I\'m not satisfied with my speaking level yet.>> CORRECT! OR >> Of course, I\'m not satisfied with my level in speaking yet. But I expect good results in someday future.>> But I expect good results someday. OR >> But I expect good results in the future. Have a happy weekend! >> CORRECT! I disagree building a big new department store in my hometown.>> I disagree with building a big new department store in my hometown. There are already two sizable departments here. >> CORRECT! >> departments -- department stores Adding a shopping center induces traffic jam in this site.>> CORRECT! It\'s another problem that the construction makes alot of dust and noise.>> Another problem is that the construction (site) produces a lot of dust and noise. To wit, extra development in my neighborhood has several negative effects whereas it has few positive effects. >> CORRECT!