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2015-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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A happy Friday to you Nina! It is Friday again^^ As you know, I was very busy this week because our buyer vistied our company. So we prepared presentation and welcomed them. Anyway we will sign a contract as soon as possible. Do you have any plans for this weekend? My family will go to furniture shop and interior shop. I will prepare to move our new apartment. My homework is as follows. "Have you ever greeted a friend or family member then noticed it was someone else?" When I was an unversity student, I promissed to meet my girl friend. But I didn't arrive before our promiss time, so I scrambled over to her. When I arrived at our appoinment place, she was waiting me. I hugged her tightly and I said that " I am sorry I'm too late" But she wasn't my girlfriend, she looks just like my girlfriend. I was very surprised and appolized her. Thank you for you feedback. Talk to you soon.

강사 첨삭

Oh my god, [이름]!

What an experience! hihihihi.

I am sure the girl was really surprised.

So what happened next? Hihihi.  I\'m just kidding.

I hope that you will have a great time this weekend.

Maybe your wife and your kids are really excited to move to your new apartment.

New place, new memories to make. ^_^

Thanks for always cheering me up.

Please go over your corrections during your free time. |
Take care! Have fun!

Teacher Nina


A happy Friday to you Nina!

>> Correct ^^
It is Friday again^^
>> Correct ^^
As you know, I was very busy this week because our buyer vistied our company.

>> Correct ^^
So we prepared presentation and welcomed them.
>> So we prepared a presentation and welcomed them.
Anyway we will sign a contract as soon as possible.
>> Correct ^^
Do you have any plans for this weekend?
>> Correct ^^
My family will go to furniture shop and interior shop.
>> My family and I will go to furniture and interior design shop.
I will prepare to move our new apartment.
>> I will prepare my things to move to our new apartment.

>> I will prepare our stuff to move to our new apartment.


My homework is as follows.
\"Have you ever greeted a friend or family member then noticed it was someone else?\"

When I was an unversity student, I promissed to meet my girl friend.
>> When I was a university student, I promised to meet my girlfriend.
But I didn\'t arrive before our promiss time, so I scrambled over to her.
>> But I didn\'t arrive there before the set time, so ran to see her.

>> But I didn\'t arrive on time, so I rushed to see her.
When I arrived at our appoinment place, she was waiting me.
>> When I arrived at our meeting place, she was waiting for me.
I hugged her tightly and I said that \" I am sorry I\'m too late\"
>> I hugged her tight and I said, \"I\'m sorry that I\'m late\".
But she wasn\'t my girlfriend, she looks just like my girlfriend.
>> But she wasn\'t my girlfriend, she just looked like her.
I was very surprised and appolized her.
>> I was very surprised and apologized to her.
Thank you for you feedback.
>> Thank you for your feedback.
Talk to you soon.

>> correct

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