homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
These days, in Korea, most family is living with their blood relations far away.
So neighbors are very important.
They are living to give help together.
However, they can't believe each other because of crime.
Nowadays, many people have a lot of stress. So they don't want to have attention for their neighbors.
Of course, I can't believe my neighbors but my husband has close friends of neighbors. I envy my husband.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
I agree with your opinion, actually. The good thing about living in a neighborhood is helping one another.
But, it is realy hard to trust anyone nowadays even your closest neighbors.
We can make friends with them but don\'t give your full trust. It is still not safe.
Well, anyway, I hope that your neighbors are good to your family.
Stay safe and always take care.
~~Teacher Kris
These days, in Korea, most family is living with their blood relations far away.
>> These days in Korea, most families are living with their relatives far away. So neighbors are very important.
>> So, neighbors are very important. They are living to give help together.
>> They are living to to give help to each other. However, they can\'t believe each other because of crime.
>> However, they can\'t trust each other because of crime. Nowadays, many people have a lot of stress.
>> Correct
So they don\'t want to have attention for their neighbors.
>> So, they don\'t give attention to their neighbors.Of course, I can\'t believe my neighbors but my husband has close friends of neighbors.
>> Of course, I can hardly believe and trust my neighbors but my husband has close friends in my neighborhood.
I envy my husband.
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