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2015-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. When I visited in Hong Kong, my family and I went through package tour. However we were very tired. So, we decided to have a free time only one day. But we couldn't go another place in Hong Kong because we didn't enough of money. We visited museums of Hong Kong's history because there was very cheap. Also there was very quite but we couldn't understand it because Hong Kong's history were written in English. If I knew about Hong Kong's history, maybe my traveling would be a better than now.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Wow. So, You had been to Hong Kong. I envy you. kk. It is good that you visited the museums in that place. Unfortunately, you the script were written in English. kk. By the way, please study the following correctiuons, okay. Thank you for making your homework in details. Take care! See you, [이름]. :)   ~~Teacher Kris   When I visited in Hong Kong, my family and I went through package tour. >> My family and I visited Hong Kong through a package tour.However we were very tired. >> However, we were very tiredSo, we decided to have a free time only one day.>> So, we decided to have a free time for only a day.But we couldn\'t go another place in Hong Kong because we didn\'t enough of money. >> But, we couldn\'t go to another place in Hong Kong because we didn\'t have enough of money.We visited museums of Hong Kong\'s history because there was very cheap. >> We visited the museums of Hong Kong\'s history because it was very cheap.Also there was very quite but we couldn\'t understand it because Hong Kong\'s history were written in English. >> Also, there was quite a problem because we couldn\'t understand it since Hong Kong\'s history was written in English.If I knew about Hong Kong\'s history, maybe my traveling would be a better than now. >> If I knew about Hong Kong\'s history, maybe my traveling would be better than now.

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