homework

If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer If I could change one thing about my hometown, I want to built a subway for people of my hometown. My hometown is the countryside. So when my hometown's people visit in Seoul, they move to ride by bus with two times. It is very uncomfortable. That is why I want to change one thing.

Hi [이름]! :) Wow. It must be very hard living in your hometwon because you do not have a subway. Good thing you have your own car. Maybe your government should build a subway in your hometown if it is possible. Actually, riding on a bus is a little bit uncomfortable. I agree with you. Let us hope for the best for your hometown. By the way, please study your corrections below, okay. :)   ~~Teacher Kris     If I could change one thing about my hometown, I want to built a subway for people of my hometown.>> If I could change one thing about my hometown, I want to build a subway for the people in my hometown. My hometown is the countryside. >> My hometown is located at the countrysideSo when my hometown\'s people visit in Seoul, they move to ride by bus with two times. >> So when the people from my hometown go to Seoul, they ride a bus two times/ twice It is very uncomfortable. >> CorrectThat is why I want to change one thing. >> Correct