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Hi there :)
Ahhhhhh, I made one more absence. I'm truely sorry. It was exatly 55 minute when I woke up. I was quite surprised by that. I had experience like this before. It was a very important test that I should have taken. In that time, my phone tunred off, so I couldn't hear warning of alarm. I should have rechared my phone beforehand. I was so fool... I woke up thanks to alarm, but I guess I ignored the ex-alarm, and finally I could woke up for the final one. I set all 9 ones to wake me up. However it seems to fail from time to time even when I sleep early. Is it a problem of my biometric habit? I need to change myself to a morning person. So I really wonder how you can get up on time if you don't mind.
<Essay>
Animal... I thought that I want to be a bird to fly the sky when I was young. But I don't have a mind about it now. I'm a little satified with being a human, this is why I don't have a idea about what kind of animals I want to be.
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Hi there!
Now, I understand the reason. Anyway, I totally understand that once in while, we do things such as this.
Well, in my case, what I do is just to think about waking up at 2:50 before sleeping. ^_^
I also use two phones in case the other one will shut down.
And I think the most important thing is to discipline yourself. ^_^
I don\'t know how I do this. Hahaha
Anyway, you have to discover your own way of disciplining yourself. ^_^
Good luck on that! See you!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there :)
>> Correct!Ahhhhhh, I made one more absence. >> Correct!
I\'m truely sorry.
>> I\'m truly sorry.
It was exatly 55 minute when I woke up.
>> It was exactly 7:55 when I woke up.
I was quite surprised by that. >> Correct!
I had experience like this before.
>> Correct!
It was a very important test that I should have taken.
>> Correct!
In that time, my phone tunred off, so I couldn\'t hear warning of alarm.
>> At that time, my phone turned off so I couldn\'t hear the alarm.
I should have rechared my phone beforehand.
>> I should have recharged my phone beforehand.
I was so fool...
>> I was a fool...
I woke up thanks to alarm, but I guess I ignored the ex-alarm, and finally I could woke up for the final one.
>> I woke up thanks to the alarm, but I guess I ignored the ex-alarm, and finally, I woke up for the final one.
I set all 9 ones to wake me up.
>> I set 9 alarms to wake me up.
However it seems to fail from time to time even when I sleep early.
>> Correct!
Is it a problem of my biometric habit?
>> Is there a problem with my biorhythm?
>> Hi there! Did you use biometrics before? Please go over the meaning of the two words. I think you were thinking of biorhythm. I remember that we talked about something like this before but I\'m not quite sure if you used biometrics or biorhythm. But anyway, the idea that came to my mind was biorhtym. ^_^
I need to change myself to a morning person.
>> Correct!
So I really wonder how you can get up on time if you don\'t mind.
>> Correct!<Essay>Animal...
>> Correct!
I thought that I want to be a bird to fly the sky when I was young.
>> I wanted to be a bird to fly in the sky when I was young.
OR>> When I was young, I wanted to be a bird so I could fly high in the sky.
But I don\'t have a mind about it now.
>> But I\'m not thinking about that now.
I\'m a little satified with being a human, this is why I don\'t have a idea about what kind of animals I want to be.
>> I\'m a little satified with being a human, this is why I don\'t have any idea about what kind of animal I want to be.
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