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2015-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Thank you for your kind comments. Those are really helpful to revise my error. After looking your comments, I realized that my family sleded, didn't sledge. What my family used there is just a tube sled for one person. Now, I exactly understand the difference between sled and sledge. Thank you, Teacher Marie. Do you think it's better for students to have a long summer break or be in a year-round school system with more breaks throughout the year? Explain your position. I perfer to have a long summer vacation. In Korea, students have 3 short breaks a year which is less than a month. In my opinion, they don't have time to recharge themselves. Moreover the limit of time restricts them to have abundant experiences they can be provided outside of school. In other words, students would be able to plan their vacation regardless of time throughout a long break.

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Hi Kaylee! It\'s always a pleasure teaching you because you are willing to learn. I learned something new today too. I had no idea about that sled-sledge thing before I Googled it. ^^ Thank you for being so diligent in our class. I admire your motivation in studying English. Keep it up! Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Thank you for your kind comments. >> CORRECT! Those are really helpful to revise my error. >> CORRECT! OR >> Those are really helpful for me to correct my mistakes. After looking your comments, I realized that my family sleded, didn\'t sledge. >> After looking at your comments, I realized that my family used the \'sled\', not the \'sledge\'. What my family used there is just a tube sled for one person. >> CORRECT!OR >> What my family used there was just a tube sled for one person.Now, I exactly understand the difference between sled and sledge. >> Now I understand what exactly is the difference between a sled and a sledge. Thank you, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!I perfer to have a long summer vacation. >> CORRECT! In Korea, students have 3 short breaks a year which is less than a month. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, they don\'t have time to recharge themselves. >> CORRECT!Moreover the limit of time restricts them to have abundant experiences they can be provided outside of school. >> GOOD! OR >> Moreover, the limited amount of time restricts them to have abundant experiences which can be provided outside of school. In other words, students would be able to plan their vacation regardless of time throughout a long break. >> CORRECT!    

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