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2015-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

If you could go back in time, would you study something different? It is an interesting question. I sometimes ask others abiut this. In my case, I don't want to go back in time. Especially during school days. It was awful. However, I really have to choose going back in time, I would study languages more. I am studying English and Japanese now. While I am sudying, I sometimes think that why I didn't study these. I really thought that I wouln'd use these languages by that time. I guess taht learning other languages is a good and practical education. If I could go back in time, I would study languages more.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon again Ms. [이름]!

Well, studying is really awful but if it is for a great purpose then why not. kkk

But at present you are now studying English and Japanese so maybe that is the continuation of what you have started before. Isn\'t it? ^^

Anyway, thanks again for your time and see you tomorrow!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


If you could go back in time, would you study something different?

It is an interesting question.

>> correct!

I sometimes ask others abiut this. 

>> correct! (about)
 In my case, I don\'t want to go back in time.

>> correct!

Especially during school days. 

>> correct! 
 It was awful.

>> correct!

However, I really have to choose going back in time, I would study languages more.

>>correct! 

>> or;  However, if I really have to choose to go back, I would study more about languages.

I am studying English and Japanese now.

>> correct!

While I am sudying, I sometimes think that why I didn\'t study these. 

>> correct! 
 I really thought that I wouln\'d use these languages by that time.

>> correct! 
 I guess taht learning other languages is a good and practical education.

>> correct! (that)
 If I could go back in time, I would study languages more.

>> correct!

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