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2015-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Essay: What’s the best thing to keep your skin smooth? I can't tell you about this. because, my skin condition is not good. so I wish I could know how to keep my skin smooth. But, there are some manuals that many people say aboutthis. First, we should drink water a lot. Second , clean your skin well. Third. take enough vitamins like fruites. Fourth, Avoid ultraviolet rays...and so on... I am trying to keep thease advices, but my skin is not getting better. so....I don't know if it works or not. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ma\'am [이름]! Thank you for your essay and for sharing your habits in keeping your skin healthy. Take care and have a nice day! ~Kelly^^ Essay: What’s the best thing to keep your skin smooth?I can\'t tell you about this. >> Correct.because, my skin condition is not good. >> Correct.so I wish I could know how to keep my skin smooth. >> Correct.But, there are some manuals that many people say aboutthis. >> But, there are some manuals that you can read about how to keep your skin smooth.First, we should drink water a lot. >> Firstly, we should drink a lot of water. Second , clean your skin well. >> Secondly, clean your skin well. Third. take enough vitamins like fruites. >> Thirdly, take enough vitamin rich foods like fruits. Fourth, Avoid ultraviolet rays...and so on... >> Lastly, avoid ultraviolet rays...and so on... I am trying to keep thease advices, but my skin is not getting better. >> I am trying to follow these advices, but my skin is not getting better.so....I don\'t know if it works or not. >> Correct.Thank you. >> Correct.

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