homework
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Essay: What’s the best thing to keep your skin smooth?
I can't tell you about this.
because, my skin condition is not good.
so I wish I could know how to keep my skin smooth.
But, there are some manuals that many people say aboutthis.
First, we should drink water a lot.
Second , clean your skin well.
Third. take enough vitamins like fruites.
Fourth, Avoid ultraviolet rays...and so on...
I am trying to keep thease advices, but my skin is not getting better.
so....I don't know if it works or not.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ma\'am [이름]!
Thank you for your essay and for sharing your habits in keeping your skin healthy.
Take care and have a nice day!
~Kelly^^
Essay: What’s the best thing to keep your skin smooth?I can\'t tell you about this.
>> Correct.because, my skin condition is not good.
>> Correct.so I wish I could know how to keep my skin smooth.
>> Correct.But, there are some manuals that many people say aboutthis.
>> But, there are some manuals that you can read about how to keep your skin smooth.First, we should drink water a lot.
>> Firstly, we should drink a lot of water. Second , clean your skin well.
>> Secondly, clean your skin well. Third. take enough vitamins like fruites.
>> Thirdly, take enough vitamin rich foods like fruits. Fourth, Avoid ultraviolet rays...and so on...
>> Lastly, avoid ultraviolet rays...and so on... I am trying to keep thease advices, but my skin is not getting better.
>> I am trying to follow these advices, but my skin is not getting better.so....I don\'t know if it works or not.
>> Correct.Thank you.
>> Correct.
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