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2015-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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do you think any kind of afterlife(ghost) exists? ============================================== I don’t believe afterlife. If I believe afterlife, that is effect for me about my life. Because I don’t my best for my life. I always spend time for worry about the afterlife. So I don’t enjoyed life and I feel anxiety everything. I want to enjoy life Positively I do not want to regret the life to death

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Good Morning, [이름]! How are you? I missed you! I wasn\'t able to talk to you yesterday because I was sick. I\'m sorry :) -Teacher Faye     do you think any kind of afterlife(ghost) exists? >> Do you think any kind of after life(ghost) exists? ==============================================I don’t believe afterlife. >> I don’t believe in afterlife.If I believe afterlife, that is effect for me about my life. >> If I believe in afterlife, it can affect my life. Because I don’t my best for my life. >> Because I don\'t do my best for my life.I always spend time for worry about the afterlife. >> I always spend time to worry about the afterlife.So I don’t enjoyed life and I feel anxiety everything. >> So, I won\'t be able to enjoy and I will just feel enxious about everything.I want to enjoy life Positively >> CORRECT:I do not want to regret the life to death >> I don\'t want to regret life when I\'m dead.

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