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do you think any kind of afterlife(ghost) exists?
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I don’t believe afterlife.
If I believe afterlife, that is effect for me about my life.
Because I don’t my best for my life.
I always spend time for worry about the afterlife.
So I don’t enjoyed life and I feel anxiety everything.
I want to enjoy life Positively
I do not want to regret the life to death
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How are you?
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do you think any kind of afterlife(ghost) exists?
>> Do you think any kind of after life(ghost) exists?
==============================================I don’t believe afterlife.
>> I don’t believe in afterlife.If I believe afterlife, that is effect for me about my life.
>> If I believe in afterlife, it can affect my life. Because I don’t my best for my life.
>> Because I don\'t do my best for my life.I always spend time for worry about the afterlife.
>> I always spend time to worry about the afterlife.So I don’t enjoyed life and I feel anxiety everything.
>> So, I won\'t be able to enjoy and I will just feel enxious about everything.I want to enjoy life Positively
>> CORRECT:I do not want to regret the life to death
>> I don\'t want to regret life when I\'m dead.
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