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2015-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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if you were a type of animal, what would you be and why? ============================================================= i am a type of bear in the animal. bear eat lots of food and get long sleep at the winter. when i have a stress, i eat some food aferthen get some sleep. i know, thah action is vert dangerous for my body. so, i want to change the method to get rid of stress. also, bear are impetuous and wild when they meet the dangerous time. sometimes, i am upset to i get a raw deal so, i think , i am aimilar to bear.

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Good Morning, [이름]! I\'m happy that you are fine. :) I\'m glad and happy to talk to you again! I will call you again tomorrow, okay! Take care. :) -Teacher Faye   if you were a type of animal, what would you be and why?>> CORRECT:=============================================================i am a type of bear in the animal. >> If I am a an animal, I\'ll be a bear.bear eat lots of food and get long sleep at the winter. >> Bear eat a lot of food and get a long sleep in winter.when i have a stress, i eat some food aferthen get some sleep. >> If I\'m stress, I eat some food and then, sleep.i know, thah action is vert dangerous for my body. >> I know, it is quite dangerous for my body.so, i want to change the method to get rid of stress. >> So, I want to changed my solution in getting rid of stress.also, bear are impetuous and wild when they meet the dangerous time. >> Also, bears are impetuous and wild when they are in danger.sometimes, i am upset to i get a raw deal >> Sometimes, when I am upset, I get raw deals.so, i think , i am aimilar to bear. >> So, I think, bears and I have similarities.

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