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if you were a type of animal, what would you be and why?
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i am a type of bear in the animal.
bear eat lots of food and get long sleep at the winter.
when i have a stress, i eat some food aferthen get some sleep.
i know, thah action is vert dangerous for my body.
so, i want to change the method to get rid of stress.
also, bear are impetuous and wild when they meet the dangerous time.
sometimes, i am upset to i get a raw deal
so, i think , i am aimilar to bear.
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if you were a type of animal, what would you be and why?>> CORRECT:=============================================================i am a type of bear in the animal.
>> If I am a an animal, I\'ll be a bear.bear eat lots of food and get long sleep at the winter.
>> Bear eat a lot of food and get a long sleep in winter.when i have a stress, i eat some food aferthen get some sleep.
>> If I\'m stress, I eat some food and then, sleep.i know, thah action is vert dangerous for my body.
>> I know, it is quite dangerous for my body.so, i want to change the method to get rid of stress.
>> So, I want to changed my solution in getting rid of stress.also, bear are impetuous and wild when they meet the dangerous time.
>> Also, bears are impetuous and wild when they are in danger.sometimes, i am upset to i get a raw deal
>> Sometimes, when I am upset, I get raw deals.so, i think , i am aimilar to bear.
>> So, I think, bears and I have similarities.
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