Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie.
Today I want to say 'I clearly washed up and didn't touch my face not to go bad'.
But I couldn't express it as I wanted. T.T
I will try more. Pease watch me with attention.
Should employers set aside time during the day for their employees to exercise? What might be some of the advantages or disadvantages of this?
If excercise time would be included in working hours it's not bad.
But I don't welcome to leave work lately due to exercise.
Moreover whether to do excercise or not is absolutely private matter.
In my opinion, the lack of excercise is not serious as setting aside exercisr time forcibly.
Therefore it would be better that employees choice themselved about that.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I know how frustrating it is to want to express something but it won\'t come out right no matter what you do. It happens to me too. Unfortunately, I still don\'t understand why you keep on using \'clearly\' in your sentence. Don\'t you think it should be \'thoroughly\'? Clearly is an adverb and it means \'in a clear, distinct manner\'. I think you are thinking about the word \'clear\' to describe the state of your face after you wash up. In that case, you can say that you washed your face thoroughly to make your skin clear. Please let me know if this is still not what you meant. ^^
Kindly review my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie.>> CORRECT!Today I want to say \'I clearly washed up and didn\'t touch my face not to go bad\'.>> Today, I wanted to say \"I washed up thoroughly and didn\'t touch my face when my hands are dirty\".
But I couldn\'t express it as I wanted. T.T>> But I couldn\'t express it the way I wanted to.
I will try more. >> I will try harder.
Pease watch me with attention.>> Please look after me more.
If excercise time would be included in working hours it\'s not bad.>> It\'s not bad if there would be an \'exercise time\' included in the working hours.
But I don\'t welcome to leave work lately due to exercise.>> But I don\'t want to leave work late because of this exercise time.
OR >> But I don\'t agree to leave work late because of this exercise time.
Moreover whether to do excercise or not is absolutely private matter.>> Moreover, whether or not an employee wants to exercise is a personal matter.
In my opinion, the lack of excercise is not serious as setting aside exercisr time forcibly.>> In my opinion, lack of exercise is not that serious for the company to set aside some time for it.
Therefore it would be better that employees choice themselved about that. >> Therefore, it would be better if the employees decide that themselves.
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