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2015-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Composition:What usually makes you feel and think negatively? Usually I feel negatively think while studying by myself. Because I always have to stay at home whole day as well as everyday I must take care of my babies and something so I can't stand running out of my bad think. but although I am very stress out, I can't stopping for my dream.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for sending your composition.
Well, do not think negatively because you doing good and you are making a progress. So you just need to be patient and keep it up.
o know you can do it.


Always,

Kathrine ^^


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Composition:What usually makes you feel and think negatively?

Usually I feel negatively think while studying by myself.

>> I usually think negatively while I am studying alone.

Because I always have to stay at home whole day as well as everyday I must take care of my babies and something so I can\'t stand running out of my bad think.

>> Because I always have to stay at home for the whole day every day and I must take care of my children so I could not stand thinking about negative things.
 but although I am very stress out, I can\'t stopping for my dream.

>> But although I am very stressed out, I could not stop my dream.

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