homework

Hello [이름]!

I read Alice\'s Adventures in Wonderland and it was wonderful.  I also love Harry Potter especially the first part. When you write, you need to double check your spelling, capitalization and the words you use.

Teacher Venus^^

I haven\'t read alice\'s adventures in wonderland.

>>>I haven\'t read Alice\'s Adventures in Wonderland.

but I watched an animation on TV when i was a kindergartener.

>>>But I watched an animation on TV when I was a kindergartener.

So i am not remembering about story exactly.

>>>So I don\'t remember the story exactly.

So i start to talk about other book i read.

>>>So I\'ll just write about the other book I read.

Harry potter is the most favorite book for me.

>>>Harry Potter is my favorite book.

harry potter is character that i love.

>>>Harry Potter is the character that I love.

He has a positve mind and a courage.

>>>He is optimistic and courageous.

Although he has not parent, he didn\'t act with no confidence.

>>>Although he\'s an orphan, he acted with confidence.

Aspects of harry potter is worty of having a complement from people.

>>>The aspects of Harry Potter are worthy of complements from people.