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what's the biggest turnoff in a man/woman?
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woman have a baby, that situation is biggest turnoff to woman's life.
after get birth a baby, woman forgive many things about physical, mental and economical.
first, woman's body change the shape and weak the body to nourish for baby.
and then, woman have to care for baby everytime that is do not do everything alone.
also, we need to money to raise the baby.
but baby give to us to happiness befor we do not meet.
so, it is important that have a baby.
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what\'s the biggest turnoff in a man/woman?
>> What\'s the biggest turnoff in a man/woman?===========================================woman have a baby, that situation is biggest turnoff to woman\'s life.
>> Woman who have baby or who is pregnant is in a situation which might turn to be the biggest turnoff to woman\'s life.after get birth a baby, woman forgive many things about physical, mental and economical.
>> After giving birth, woman forget many things about physical, mental and economical.first, woman\'s body change the shape and weak the body to nourish for baby.
>> First, woman\'s body changed; the shape and body becomes weak and the bod nourished the baby.and then, woman have to care for baby everytime that is do not do everything alone.
>> And then, woman have to care for baby everytime they don\'t have things to do.also, we need to money to raise the baby.>> Also, we need money to raise the baby.but baby give to us to happiness befor we do not meet.
>> But, baby give us happiness.so, it is important that have a baby.
>> So, it is important to have a baby.
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