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Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
Well, being in different places is just one factor for us to be happy and feel happy.
And as what you have mentioned, to be with the people whom you like and love is also one of them.
Thanks again for your time today Ms. [이름] and may you find the smart watch that would satisfy your curiosity. kkk
See you then!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Does your happiness depend on where you live?
No, it doesn\'t. I think that my happiness depend on where I am.
>> No, it doesn\'t. I think that my happiness depends on where I am.
I was in the philippines for a while.
>> correct!
I was lonely and sad in the biginning of staying there however, I had precious friends then I wasn\'t sad and lonely any more.
>> I was lonely and sad in the beginning of staying there, however, I had precious friends and I wasn\'t sad and lonely anymore.
I enjoyed staying there and wanted to live there.
>> correct!
I thought that I ws happy because of the place.
>> correct! (was)
So I tried to go to Austrailia imgining that I would be happy and have lots of new experiances but I was wrong.
>> correct! (Australia, imagining, experiences)
>> or: So I tried going to Australia thinking that I would be happy and would have lots of new experiences but I was wrong.
I wasn\'t happy eventhough I did many interesting things there.
>> correct!
It is because I did have good friends there.
>> correct!
I wasn\'t happy whenever I saw good views.
>> correct!
I wanted to share the thing that I was doing!
>> correct!
I realized that my happiness depend on who I am with.
>> I realized that my happiness depends on who I am with.
I just can not feel that I am happy with people around me like families and friends.
>> correct!
After this experience, I am more thanksful to people around me.
>> correct! (thankful)
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