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2015-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to be born in the rock. THere is no dangerous things and no hard things when I become rock. Also I can travel aroung the korea because of the erosion and Hydrologic cycle. i can be the shelter of lichen and lizard. Beautiful things like olivine,pyroxene,quartz,and biotite can form.

강사 첨삭

Hello again TOM!

What an interesting essay. ^^

Your ideas were marvelous. ^^ Keep it up!

I think being a rock would be good but it is also dangerous.

Let me ask you another question, what if you will be born again, what nationality would you choose? Why?

You can tell me your answer tomorrow in class. ^^

Good luck. I know that you will do your best studying your lessons tonight.

Teacher Nina


I want to be born in the rock.

>> Did you mean: I want to be born as a rock.
THere is no dangerous things and no hard things when I become rock.

>> Did you mean: I won\'t be hurt when I become a rock.
Also I can travel aroung the korea because of the erosion and Hydrologic cycle.

>> Did you mean: I can also travel around Korea because of erosion and Hydrologic cycle.
i can be the shelter of lichen and lizard.

>> correct

>> I can be the shelter of lichens and lizards.
Beautiful things like olivine,pyroxene,quartz,and biotite can form.

>> Beautiful things like Olivine, Pyroxene, Quarts and Biotite can be formed.

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