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2015-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello, Teacher Nina! How are you today? I'm sorry that I didn't attend our class yesterday. I suddenly attended a meeting with my collegue Jayden(your another student). As you know, I am very busy nowdays but I'm ok and I will practice speaking in English. My homework is as follows. "Do you believe that the rich are growing richer, and the poor are growing poorer?" Yes, I believe it. Especially, the rich seems to be getting richer, and the poor poorer in Korean. If I have lots of money, I can buy many building. So, I will make an easy gain money through income from monthly rental fee. And I will getting richer and I will invest other parts. I wonder what you can say about that. Thank you for your feedbacks. Have a nice day. Talk to you soon.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Happy Thursday!

It\'s okay, no worries. ^^

I know that you are working hard to be richer. Hihihi.

You have a great idea. I want that kind of business too.

Real estate is not a losing investment.

It will be a really good business if you know how to handle it.

Good luck. Don\'t forget me when you will be the richest man in Korea, okay? Hihihi.

Have a great day. Take Care!

Teacher Nina


Hello, Teacher Nina!
>> Correct ^^
How are you today?
>> Correct ^^
I\'m sorry that I didn\'t attend our class yesterday.
>> Correct ^^

>> I\'m sorry that I was absent yesterday.
I suddenly attended a meeting with my collegue Jayden(your another student).

>> I attended a meeting with my colleague, Jayden, your other student.

>> I suddenly attended a meeting with my colleague, Jayden, your other student.
As you know, I am very busy nowdays but I\'m ok and I will practice speaking in English.
>> Correct ^^


My homework is as follows.

\"Do you believe that the rich are growing richer, and the poor are growing poorer?\"

Yes, I believe it.

>> Yes, I believe in that saying.

Especially, the rich seems to be getting richer, and the poor poorer in Korean.
>> The rich seems to be richer and the poor becomes poorer in Korea.
If I have lots of money, I can buy many building.

>> If I have a lot of money, I can buy many buildings.

>> If I am rich, I can purchase a lot of buildings.

So, I will make an easy gain money through income from monthly rental fee.
>> So, I can earn money easier through the monthly rental fee.

>> So, I can have income through the monthly rental fee.
And I will getting richer and I will invest other parts.
>> And I will be richer then, I will invest in other businesses.
I wonder what you can say about that.
>> I am wondering what you can say about that.
Thank you for your feedbacks.
>> Thank you for your feedback.
Have a nice day.

>> Correct ^^

Talk to you soon.

>> Correct ^^

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