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2015-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello, It's been a long time to make homework.^^; I prefer shopping offline than online due to it is possible to see directly and can be explained from sales person. Even though price is little bit high. So I usually go to shopping with my wife and select something through talk each other. It makes to refresh ours. So I like go to shopping.

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Good morning! Thanks for having some time to answer your homework. I hope you also enjoyed your day off. ^_^ I totally agree with your idea. I also prefer shopping offline because we can even try it if it suits us. Well, let\'s talk again later! See you! ~T. Jessie~ Hello, It\'s been a long time to make homework.^^;>> Hello, It\'s been a long time since I made my homework.^^;I prefer shopping offline than online due to it is possible to see directly and can be explained from sales person. >> I prefer shopping offline than online due to the possibility to see directly and it can be explained by the sales person. Even though price is little bit high. >> Even though the price is a little bit high. OR>> Even though it is more expensive. So I usually go to shopping with my wife and select something through talk each other. >> So I usually go shopping with my wife and we choose something by talking to each other. It makes to refresh ours. >> It refreshes us. So I like go to shopping. >> Correct!

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