homework~
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First of all, Thing that i want to ask is 'Composition making' have just 'writing' or includes different meaning.
And i was mad when we are call. Because that time, suddenly my mom and young sister have a noise... so i can't concentrate on call during a moment..
Now i start homework!
Umm.. i have many good memories. So i can't choose..
One of the memories is thing go to theater and playworld with father, and relatives old ladies.
Relatives ladies and me dressedto match the white color. I wore a white one-piece.
i was very happy. That time i was 6 years old, i wanted old sister.
i played in chidren's playworld with them. I have a picture contained this memory.
Every time I see it, i want to go that time. I'm already 22 years old. It is so sad. This time make me so sensitive. My fondest childhood memories are so many except this.
But i'm tired. See you later!^^
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday my dear [이름]!
I hope you are feeling good today!Thank you for sharing these things to me.
I hope that you\'ll continue to have more cherishable memories.
Happy weekend!
~Teacher Shanee
First of all, Thing that i want to ask is \'Composition making\' have just \'writing\' or includes different meaning.
>>> First of all, the thing that I want to ask is if I just have to make a composition or should I include different examples. [I don\'t actually get what you mean here.]And i was mad when we are call.
>>> And I was mad when we\'re having the class.
Because that time, suddenly my mom and young sister have a noise... so i can\'t concentrate on call during a moment..
>>> Because at that time, suddenly my mom and younger sister made some noise so I couldn\'t concentrate on the lesson.Now i start homework!
>>> Now, I will start talking about my homework.Umm.. i have many good memories.
>>> Uhhhm...I have many good memories.
So i can\'t choose..
>>> So I can\'t choose.One of the memories is thing go to theater and playworld with father, and relatives old ladies.
>>> One of the memories is when I went to the theater and amusement park with my father and my old female relatives.Relatives ladies and me dressedto match the white color.
>>> My female relatives made me wear a white dress.
I wore a white one-piece.
>>> So I wore it.i was very happy.
>>> I was very happy.
That time i was 6 years old, i wanted old sister.
>>> That time, I was six years old and I wanted a sister.i played in chidren\'s playworld with them.
>>> I played in the children\'s playground with them.
I have a picture contained this memory.
>>> I have a picture which reminds me of this memory.Every time I see it, i want to go that time.
>>> Every time I see it, I feel like I want to go back to that time.
I\'m already 22 years old.
>>> Correct!
It is so sad.
>>> Correct!
This time make me so sensitive.
>>> I am so sensitive these days.
My fondest childhood memories are so many except this.
>>> Aside from this, I have many fond childhood memories.
>>> OR: Aside from this, my fondest childhood memories are many.But i\'m tired. See you later!^^
>>> Correct! [I\'m]
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