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what makes you want to do better?
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i want to grow up the ability to speak english.
so, i started to phone english and watching tv progarm of america withour subtitle.
sometimes, i stayed the guesthuse that went to trava to abroad.
i have chance to make a friend.
buti didn't becasue i didn't speak english well.
i just make a smile to them whom talk to me used the english.
i hope to make a friend when i go to trip oversea.
also, i grow up my career.
i really want to grow up the abiity of english.
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what makes you want to do better?
>> What makes you want to do better?===============================================i want to grow up the ability to speak english.
>> I want to grow up with the ability to speak English.so, i started to phone english and watching tv progarm of america withour subtitle.
>> So, I started the phone English and watched tv progarm of America without subtitle.sometimes, i stayed the guesthuse that went to trava to abroad.
>> Sometimes, I stayed in the guest house and went abroad.i have chance to make a friend.
>> I have chance to make a friends.buti didn\'t becasue i didn\'t speak english well.>> But, I didn\'t becasue i didn\'t speak English well.
i just make a smile to them whom talk to me used the english.
>> I just smile to people who talk to me using English.i hope to make a friend when i go to trip oversea.
>> I hope to make friends when I go to trip overseas.also, i grow up my career.>> Also, I succeed in my career.i really want to grow up the abiity of english.
>> I really want to grow up with the abiity of speaking English.
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