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2015-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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what makes you want to do better? =============================================== i want to grow up the ability to speak english. so, i started to phone english and watching tv progarm of america withour subtitle. sometimes, i stayed the guesthuse that went to trava to abroad. i have chance to make a friend. buti didn't becasue i didn't speak english well. i just make a smile to them whom talk to me used the english. i hope to make a friend when i go to trip oversea. also, i grow up my career. i really want to grow up the abiity of english.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Happy Friday! Wake up now, okay! HAHA :) Have a good weekend!   what makes you want to do better? >> What makes you want to do better?===============================================i want to grow up the ability to speak english. >> I want to grow up with the ability to speak English.so, i started to phone english and watching tv progarm of america withour subtitle. >> So, I started the phone English and watched tv progarm of America without subtitle.sometimes, i stayed the guesthuse that went to trava to abroad. >> Sometimes, I stayed in the guest house and went abroad.i have chance to make a friend. >> I have chance to make a friends.buti didn\'t becasue i didn\'t speak english well.>> But, I didn\'t becasue i didn\'t speak English well. i just make a smile to them whom talk to me used the english. >> I just smile to people who talk to me using English.i hope to make a friend when i go to trip oversea. >> I hope to make friends when I go to trip overseas.also, i grow up my career.>> Also, I succeed in my career.i really want to grow up the abiity of english. >> I  really want to grow up with the abiity of  speaking English.

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