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Hi there!
Yeah. It is realyl important to learn grammar although it's not that fun as other things. Then do you think grammar is most important? In my opinion, words are more important than grammar. We can speak a language despite shllow knowledge of grammar but we can't if we don't know a lot of words. So it's more important to know words than grammar to understand and talk. Of course I don't mean that grammar isn't important. How do you think?
Take care!
<Essay>
I prefer online shopping. It's cheeper to buy in online than offline in most cases. And I don't have to go outside to buy stuff. It's really confortable. It sometimes costs shpping charge, but there's a chance for exemption. The demerit is that I have to wait a few days instead but not so long.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sending a composition as always.^_^
I agree with your idea [이름].
However, if your goal is to be a fluent speaker then you also have to learn grammar.
Every skill is important in learning a language so you have to try to improve all of them
For now, let\'s enjoy our weekend. See you!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there!
>> Correct!Yeah.
>> Correct!It is realyl important to learn grammar although it\'s not that fun as other things.
>> It is really important to learn grammar although it\'s not as fun as other things.
Then do you think grammar is most important?
>> Then do you think grammar is the most important?
In my opinion, words are more important than grammar. >> Correct!
We can speak a language despite shllow knowledge of grammar but we can\'t if we don\'t know a lot of words.
>> We can speak a language despite shallow knowledge in grammar but we can\'t if we don\'t know a lot of words.
So it\'s more important to know words than grammar to understand and talk.
>> Correct!
OR>> So it\'s more important to know words than grammar to be able to understand and talk using the language.
Of course I don\'t mean that grammar isn\'t important.
>> Correct!
How do you think?
>> What do you think?Take care!>> Correct!<Essay>I prefer online shopping.
>> Correct!
It\'s cheeper to buy in online than offline in most cases.
>> It\'s cheaper to buy online than offline in most cases.
And I don\'t have to go outside to buy stuff.
>> Correct!
It\'s really confortable.
>> It\'s really comfortable.
It sometimes costs shpping charge, but there\'s a chance for exemption.
>> It sometimes costs shipping charge, but there\'s a chance for exemption.
The demerit is that I have to wait a few days instead but not so long.
>> The demerit is that I have to wait for a few days but not so long.
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