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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Theacher Marie.
Today my listening comprehension was overally poor.
So I listened again the recording that Power English's website provide.
After listening again, I feeled foolish. Ha Ha.
I'm trying to study more listening comprehension this weekend.
See you Monday!
Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home.
Actually, it is not welcomed to visit a friend without notice.
However, Koreans generally don't expose their unpleasant feelings in that case.
In my case, I would prepare delivey foods even though I'm not glad to come her(or him)
In Korea, lots of delivery foods can be provided without any limt in time and space.
Moreover, I think that those are more delicious that my foods.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I didn\'t want to point that out during the class because I didn\'t want you to feel discouraged. But, yes, your listening comprehension was a bit poor today. ^^ I hope you can do something to improve this. Try listening to some English dialogues, essays and texts online, write them down and find the main idea. Anyway, I\'m not too happy about unexpected visitors too. I feel like it\'s a bit disrespectful and a slight violation of my privacy. Thanks for putting in your two cents about this.
Kindly review the corrections below. Always double check your work for spelling and typographical errors. :)
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Theacher Marie.
>> CORRECT!>> Theacher = TeacherToday my listening comprehension was overally poor.
>> CORRECT!
>> overally - overlySo I listened again the recording that Power English\'s website provide.
>> So I listened to the recording again from the Power English website.After listening again, I feeled foolish. Ha Ha.
>> After listening to it again, I felt foolish.
I\'m trying to study more listening comprehension this weekend.
>> I\'m going to try to study more listening comprehension lessons this weekend.
See you on Monday!>> CORRECT!Actually, it is not welcomed to visit a friend without notice.
>> Actually, a friend who visits another without notice is not welcome.
However, Koreans generally don\'t expose their unpleasant feelings in that case.
>> CORRECT!>> in that case = in that situationIn my case, I would prepare delivey foods even though I\'m not glad to come her(or him)
>> In my case, I would order some delivery food even though I\'m not happy about the unexpected guest.
In Korea, lots of delivery foods can be provided without any limt in time and space.
>> In Korea, there are a lot of food delivery services which can deliver within a time limit, regardless of the distance.
Moreover, I think that those are more delicious that my foods.
>> Moreover, I think that those are more delicious than my own homecooked meals.
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