Homework

Hello there [이름] ^^

Yes, you are right! We can take a rest this weekend.

I am glad that you were able to decide on the things needed in your new house.

Thank you for sharing your insights about the topic.

I hope that you will have a great time with your family.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina

T.G.I.F Nina!
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We can start our rest after having a very busy weekdays.
>> We can take a rest after having a very busy weekday, 
Do you have any plans for this weekend?
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My family will go to furniture shop and interior design shop.
>> My family and I will go to a furniture and interior design shop.
I decided my new house interior with my wife.
>> Did you mean: My wife and  I already made a decision about the interior design of our house.
I will watch soccer game tomorrow, because Korean national soccer team played in the Asian Cup finals.
>> I will watch a soccer game tomorrow because Korean national soccer team played in the Asian Cup Finals. 

My homework is as follows.

\"What sort of things help people to get jobs? What things prevent them getting jobs?\"

Many Korean students effot to acheive high score TOEIC and study English.
>> Many Korean students make a lot of effort to achieve a high score in TOIEC and in studying English.

>> Many Korean students do their best to get a high score in TOIEC and in studying English.
Also they study many things (certifcation, presentation skill and interview).
>> Did you mean: They also study many things for certification exam, presentation and interview. 

>> They study for a certification exam, presentation and interview.
They attach importance to get a good degree in good university.

>> Did you mean: They make it important to get a good degree in a prestigious university.

>> They focus on it to get a good degree in a great university,
But many Korea man enter the millitary, so they waste their important time.
>> Did you mean:  But many Korean men enter the military, so they waste their time,
>> But many Korean men enter the military, so they waste some of their time.
Thank you for your feedback.
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Talk to you soon.
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Have a nice day~

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