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2015-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Today's homework is related to me. If I have a baby, It makes the limitation to select someting such as job, move to home. In these days, I always think about how could I make confortable family. because after get a baby, my wife won't continue her job due to keep a baby. So I really need to satable job. For earn the money a lot and continue my job more than 20 years. So sometimes I worry about this, but I really want to get a baby.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thanks for sharing this to me. It really is related to you. ^_^ I am glad that you got it all planned. I hope that you\'ll have a child soon. ^_^ For now, you have to prepare yourself to be a good father. ^_^ Well, we better talk again tomorrow. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Today\'s homework is related to me. >> Correct! If I have a baby, It makes the limitation to select someting such as job, move to home. >> If I will have a baby, it limits us to select something such as job or moving home. OR>> Do you mean: If I will have a baby, we have to consider her/him in making decisions related to our job or to our home. In these days, I always think about how could I make confortable family. >> These days, I always think about how can I make my family comfortable. because after get a baby, my wife won\'t continue her job due to keep a baby. >> Because after I get a baby, my wife won\'t continue her job to take care of our baby. OR>> Because after I get a baby, my wife will quit her job to take care of our baby. So I really need to satable job. >> So I really need a stable job. For earn the money a lot and continue my job more than 20 years. >> To earn a lot of money and to continue working for more than 20 years. So sometimes I worry about this, but I really want to get a baby. >> Correct!

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