Homework
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Today's homework is related to me. If I have a baby, It makes the limitation to select someting such as job, move to home. In these days, I always think about how could I make confortable family. because after get a baby, my wife won't continue her job due to keep a baby. So I really need to satable job. For earn the money a lot and continue my job more than 20 years. So sometimes I worry about this, but I really want to get a baby.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks for sharing this to me.
It really is related to you. ^_^
I am glad that you got it all planned. I hope that you\'ll have a child soon. ^_^
For now, you have to prepare yourself to be a good father. ^_^
Well, we better talk again tomorrow. See you!
~T. Jessie~
Today\'s homework is related to me.
>> Correct!
If I have a baby, It makes the limitation to select someting such as job, move to home.
>> If I will have a baby, it limits us to select something such as job or moving home.
OR>> Do you mean: If I will have a baby, we have to consider her/him in making decisions related to our job or to our home.
In these days, I always think about how could I make confortable family.
>> These days, I always think about how can I make my family comfortable.
because after get a baby, my wife won\'t continue her job due to keep a baby.
>> Because after I get a baby, my wife won\'t continue her job to take care of our baby.
OR>> Because after I get a baby, my wife will quit her job to take care of our baby.
So I really need to satable job.
>> So I really need a stable job.
For earn the money a lot and continue my job more than 20 years.
>> To earn a lot of money and to continue working for more than 20 years.
So sometimes I worry about this, but I really want to get a baby.
>> Correct!
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