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2015-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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what do you have that you can not live without? ============================================== We need many things to live I thought, if I understood the word by dictionary, money is very important. Currently we live in free market systems Money is connected to survive. Because I used the money when I bought some food and paid the rent fee of house. So, we have to go to work and earn money. money is not substitute for everything like a family, friend. There words have different a standard of value. So, money is very important, but that is not at all.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Happy Monday! Thank you for accomplishing your homeowrk! I am glad that you had a good weekend. :) -T.Faye   what do you have that you can not live without? >> CORRECT:==============================================We need many things to live >> CORRECT:I thought, if I understood the word by dictionary, money is very important. >> I thought, if I understood the word by dictionary it would be okay because money is very important.Currently we live in free market systems >> Currently, we live in the free market systems.Money is connected to survive. >> Money is needed to survive.Because I used the money when I bought some food and paid the rent fee of house. >> CORRECT:So, we have to go to work and earn money. >> CORRECT:money is not substitute for everything like a family, friend. >> Money can be a substiture for everything: family and friends, etc.There words have different a standard of value. >> CORRECT:So, money is very important, but that is not at all. > So, money is very important but, there are also more important things.

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