Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Marie.
After listening to our conversation again, I knew you can play the guitar.
Although you try to speak slower I often feel that I didn't follow you.
Of course it's because of my unbalancing study that focused on reading in my past.
Please understand me and speak more slower until my English improves.
I always thank you for your kind teaching.
Imagine a foreigner is asking you for directions (think about a particular place or area, like a mall, a theater or a school). Give directions to get from one point to another. Explain what landmarks he or she might see along the way.
I imagined that a foreigner askes me for a direction to get a near subway station.
There is an elementary school in frount of my apartment.
If you would pass that school, you would probably meet the crossroads.
When you cross the intersection, you can see 'Star Class' that is a tall multipurpose building.
The subway station is under the multipurpose building.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thank you for being honest with me. I also noticed that you didn\'t react much when I told you about how I used to play the guitar. Apparently, you didn\'t understand me again. Don\'t worry I\'ll try my best to speak even more slowly for you. Kindly check the corrections below. I noticed a lot of spelling and typographical mistakes so please take note of them.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher Marie.
>> CORRECT! After listening to our conversation again, I knew you can play the guitar.
>> CORRECT! >> knew = found outAlthough you try to speak slower I often feel that I didn\'t follow you.
>> CORRECT! >> didn\'t = couldn\'tOf course it\'s because of my unbalancing study that focused on reading in my past.
>> Of course it\'s because of my unbalanced studying in the past that focused on my reading skills.
Please understand me and speak more slower until my English improves.
>> CORRECT! >> more slower = slowerI always thank you for your kind teaching.
>> CORRECT! I imagined that a foreigner askes me for a direction to get a near subway station.
>> I imagined that a foreigner asked me for directions to get to a nearby subway station.There is an elementary school in frount of my apartment.
>> CORRECT! > frount = frontIf you would pass that school, you would probably meet the crossroads.
>> If you get pass that school, you would come to a crossroad.
When you cross the intersection, you can see \'Star Class\' that is a tall multipurpose building.
>> When you cross the intersection, you can see a tall multipurpose building called \"Star Class\".
The subway station is under the multipurpose building.
>> CORRECT!
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