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2015-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Is there something in your life right now that must be rooted out? As I always say I don't want to regret about how I have lived my life so far. But if I really have a chance to root ot my worst moment in my life, I would root out my twenties. I think that every person has a dark and hard moment in their life. My twenties as like dark and hard moment for me. I can't say what made me really hard during that time. Howeve, I was memtally so small and weak. I tried my best what I was doing but I felt like I was the worst person and I was so poor.In deed, I felt that noboy was around me even though they were with me. I was so nagative. I want to root out this moment. I don't really know what has changed my ideas but I am so happy with my life.*^^*

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

Well, I guess you were in the stage like every people in that age have experienced.

The feeling like you are alone, weak, and miserable in this world. Like we want to

I have experienced that too, honestly speaking.

But according to experts, it is just a normal stage in our life.

And pretty sure that you have learned from it.
As they say, experience is the best teacher and as what you have said, you are enjoying your life now.

I am happy to know that.
See you later then!

Enjoy the rest of the day!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Is there something in your life right now that must be rooted out?

As I always say I don\'t want to regret about how I have lived my life so far.

>> correct!
 But if I really have a chance to root ot my worst moment in my life, I would root out my twenties.

>>  correct!

I think that every person has a dark and hard moment in their life.

>>  correct! 
 My twenties as like dark and hard moment for me.

>> It was dark and a hard moment of my life when I was in my twenties.

 I can\'t say what made me really hard during that time.

>> correct! 

Howeve, I was memtally so small and weak.

>> However, I was mentally small and weak.

I tried my best what I was doing but I felt like I was the worst person and I was so poor.

>> I tried my best in what I was doing but I felt like I was the worst person and  I was so poor.

In deed, I felt that noboy was around me even though they were with me.

>> correct! (Indeed)

 I was so nagative.

>> correct! (negative)

I want to root out this moment.

>> correct!
 I don\'t really know what has changed my ideas but I am so happy with my life.*^^*

>> correct!

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