homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The sky is blue, the grass is green and the ocean is mixed green and blue.
it is sunny day here in Jeju.
We can see the MT. Halla covered with snow.
We can see the island called "Guantal".
강사 첨삭
Hi and good afternoon TOM!
I want to see Halla mountain someday. ^^
Oh! Jeju Island is such a lovely place.
It is good to hear that the weather in your city is sunny.
Have a great day. Talk to you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
The sky is blue, the grass is green and the ocean is mixed green and blue.
>> correct
>> The sky is blue, the grass is green and the ocean is blue green.
it is sunny day here in Jeju.
>> correct
>> The weather is sunny in Jeju.
We can see the MT. Halla covered with snow.
>> We can see Halla mountain which is covered with snow.
We can see the island called \"Guantal\".
>> correct
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