homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have enough money, I would purchase a business.
Because I already have my house, so I want to purchase a business.
My friends are doing their business also, they make a lot of money as their business. So sometimes I envy them.
If I would have my business, I can do my business well.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
How are you? Actually, business people are rich because of their business
that is why I envy them as well. It\'s good that you want to establish your own business.
Soon, If you have money then try to establish a business. Good luck wiht your plans, [이름]! ^^
Hopefully, you will succeed.
Take care! ^^
See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
If I have enough money, I would purchase a business.
>> If I have enough money, I will establish my own business.Because I already have my house, so I want to purchase a business.
>> Since I have my house already, I want to establish my own business.My friends are doing their business also, they make a lot of money as their business.
>> My friends have businesses too and they make a lot of money from their businesses.
So sometimes I envy them.
>> So, I envy them. If I would have my business, I can do my business well.
>> If I have a business, I will manage my business very well.
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