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2015-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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If I have enough money, I would purchase a business. Because I already have my house, so I want to purchase a business. My friends are doing their business also, they make a lot of money as their business. So sometimes I envy them. If I would have my business, I can do my business well.

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Hi [이름]! How are you? Actually, business people are rich because of their business that is why I envy them as well. It\'s good that you want to establish your own business. Soon, If you have money then try to establish a business. Good luck wiht your plans, [이름]! ^^ Hopefully, you will succeed. Take care! ^^ See you! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   If I have enough money, I would purchase a business. >> If I have enough money, I will establish my own business.Because I already have my house, so I want to purchase a business. >> Since I have my house already, I want to establish my own business.My friends are doing their business also, they make a lot of money as their business. >> My friends have businesses too and they make a lot of money from their businesses. So sometimes I envy them. >> So, I envy them. If I would have my business, I can do my business well. >> If I have a business, I will manage my business very well.

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