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2015-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Hi~ Faye! Nowadays I was so busy and I couldn't do my homework. I'm sorry that I couldn't acheive it. But I always try it. I think making the sentences by myself is very useful. Let's talk about my homework. Q : What can you do today that you could not do a year ago? A : There are many changes to me for a year. Best of all is that I can play the guitar now. I have wanted to learn the instruments since I quited playing the piano at 12 years old. I started playing the guitar last year in the academy. Playing the guitar makes me energetic. I would like to try a variety of instruments.

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  Good morning, [이름]! It\'s okay, I understand. Thank you for accomplishing your homework. -T.Faye   >> CORRECT:Nowadays I was so busy and I couldn\'t do my homework. >> Now a days I was so busy and I couldn\'t do my homework.I\'m sorry that I couldn\'t acheive it. >> CORRECT:But I always try it. >> CORRECT:I think making the sentences by myself is very useful.>> I think making sentences by myself is a good way of enhancing my grammar ability.Let\'s talk about my homework.>> CORRECT:Q : What can you do today that you could not do a year ago?>> CORRECT:A : There are many changes to me for a year. >>  There are many changes that happens to me after a year.Best of all is that I can play the guitar now. >> CORRECT:I have wanted to learn the instruments since I quited playing the piano at 12 years old.>> CORRECT: I started playing the guitar last year in the academy. >> CORRECT:Playing the guitar makes me energetic. >> CORRECT:I would like to try a variety of instruments. >> CORRECT:

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