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2015-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher Marie. Today, I'm more than usually late. Because I had a class for English conversation after our class. Tomorrow, I'm going to tell you about the class. Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Usually, I enjoy precooked foods although some people don't prefer them due to their health. There are various advantages to use them. First of all, I don't need to buy a lot of ingredients to make meals. Moreover, it is possible that I prepare to my meal in a short time. Especially it is useful when my son pesters me for a meal.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I\'m looking forward to your stories about that English conversation class. I hope it went well. Thanks for still doing your homework. As they say, better late than never. :) Like you, I also enjoy packaged and instant food. They are more convenient and much cheaper. Kindly review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT!Today, I\'m more than usually late. >> Today, I\'m later than usual. OR >> Today, I submitted my homework later than usual.Because I had a class for English conversation after our class. >> Because I had an English conversation class after our class. Tomorrow, I\'m going to tell you about the class. >> CORRECT!Usually, I enjoy precooked foods although some people don\'t prefer them due to their health. >> CORRECT!OR >> I usually enjoy precooked food although some people don\'t prefer them due to health concerns. There are various advantages to use them. >> There are various advantages in buying them. First of all, I don\'t need to buy a lot of ingredients to make meals. >> CORRECT!Moreover, it is possible that I prepare to my meal in a short time. >> Moreover, it is possible for me to prepare my meal in a short time. Especially it is useful when my son pesters me for a meal. >> It is especially useful when my son pesters me for a quick meal.    

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