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I think money is the best way to motivate people.my mother say,"If you get a good grade,I will give some money to you." then I can study hard.so I think money is the best way to motivate people.
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Hello there, [이름]!!!
Money can really motivate people to work hard, but we must be careful not to love money.
We must also be keen on what is the most important things in life.
Have a great day!!!
Thank you for your essay!!!
T. Jeny
I think money is the best way to motivate people.
>>correct
my mother say,\"If you get a good grade,I will give some money to you.\"
>>My mother said,\" If you will get good grades, I will give you some money.\"
then I can study hard.so I think money is the best way to motivate people.
>>That is why, I am studying hard, so I think money is the best way to motivate people.
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