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2015-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Happy Tuesday Nina! How are you today? I wrote many test reports and analaysis them today. My boss was going on a business trip during this week, so I will go home early. I ate a Sushi with my sister and my family last night. She visited our hometown last weekend and she went my home yesterday. My parents brought a Sushi and my sister brought it. So we had a enjoy time and satisfied it. As far as I know, you dislike a Sushi. Talk to you soon. Have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

[이름]. ^.^

How are you today? I hope that you will have enough rest tonight.

You are right. I don\'t like Sushi. ^^

I am glad that you had a marvelous time with your family and your sister.

Have a great day.
Teacher Nina


Happy Tuesday Nina!
>> Correct
How are you today?
>> Correct
I wrote many test reports and analaysis them today.
>> I wrote many test reports and analysis about them today.
My boss was going on a business trip during this week, so I will go home early.
>> My boss is on a business trip this week, so I will go home early.
I ate a Sushi with my sister and my family last night.
>> I ate Sushi with my sister and my family last night.
She visited our hometown last weekend and she went my home yesterday.
>> She went to our hometown last weekend and she also went to my house yesterday.
My parents brought a Sushi and my sister brought it.
>> My parents bought Sushi and my sister brought it to my house.
So we had a enjoy time and satisfied it.
>> So we enjoyed our time and I am satisfied with the food.

>> So we had a good time and I am so satisfied with the food.
As far as I know, you dislike a Sushi.
>> As far as I know, you dislike Sushi.

>> As far as I know, you don\'t like Sushi.
Talk to you soon.
>> Correct


Have a nice day.

>> Correct

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