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2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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What would you regret not doing? =============================================== I never go to Europe. I had an opportunity going to Europe ten years ago. Because my friend stayed in united kingdom for two years. She attended a UK university on an exchange scholarship. After the semester, she came back to korea. While she lived in UK, I should go to Europe. she suggest to visited to her. But I missed the chance, I didn’t go. I make an excuse that I don’t have enough money. And then I believe to if I want to go to Europe, whenever I am able to go. However, still I don’t go to Europe , even I went to America of twice. So, I really regret that I didn’t go to Europe while my friend stayed in UK.

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Good Morning! You always accomplished an impressive homework! Good job, to you! -Teacher Faye   What would you regret not doing? >> CORRECT:===============================================I never go to Europe. >> CORRECT:I had an opportunity going to Europe ten years ago. >> I had an opportunity to go to Europe ten years ago.Because my friend stayed in united kingdom for two years. >> CORRECT:She attended a UK university on an exchange scholarship. >> She attended in the UK university for an exchange scholarship.After the semester, she came back to korea. >> CORRECT:While she lived in UK, I should go to Europe. >> While she lived in UK, I should gone to Europe.she suggest to visited to her. >> She told me to visit to her.But I missed the chance, I didn’t go. >> CORRECT:I make an excuse that I don’t have enough money. >> CORRECT:  And then I believe to if I want to go to Europe, whenever I am able to go. >>  And then I believe that if I want to go to Europe, I will be able to go whenever I am able too.However, still I don’t go to Europe , even if I went to America twice. >> However, still I don’t go to Europe , even I went to America of twice.So, I really regret that I didn’t go to Europe while my friend stayed in UK. >> CORRECT:

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