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2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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It was a delight speaking with you, Teacher Marie. In Korea, today is 'Onset of Spring' by a lunar calendar. That day, Korean usually pray excellent luck of this year. So I wish you all the best this year. It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? I think that it is very useful to gain knowledge from the books. Of course, I don't neglect to learn something from experneces. However, we don't have enought time to try all experiences which we want to know. Moreover, we would have money troble if we want to advance our knowledge throughout experiences. In my opinion, it is efficient way to improve our level of knowledge in consideration of time and money problems.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thank you so much for wishing me the best this year. Right back at you! :) I wish you more success and happiness. You deserve it. :) I\'m so excited for the lunar new year because I can travel and take some time off from work. ^^ Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ It was a delight speaking with you, Teacher Marie. >> CORRECT! In Korea, today is \'Onset of Spring\' by a lunar calendar. >> CORRECT! >> by a = in theThat day, Korean usually pray excellent luck of this year. >> On this day, Koreans usually pray for excellent luck this year. So I wish you all the best this year. >> CORRECT! I think that it is very useful to gain knowledge from the books. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think that it is more efficient to gain knowledge from books.Of course, I don\'t neglect to learn something from experneces. >> Of course, I don\'t ignore the things that I learn from experiences. However, we don\'t have enought time to try all experiences which we want to know. >> However, we don\'t have enough time to experience everything that we want to know. Moreover, we would have money troble if we want to advance our knowledge throughout experiences. >> Moreover, we would have money problems if we want to gain more knowledge through experiences. In my opinion, it is efficient way to improve our level of knowledge in consideration of time and money problems. >> In my opinion, it is more efficient to improve our knowledge (through books), considering the time and money that we have to spend.  

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