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2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What is something that you've always wanted to do but you haven't done until now? There were things that I really wanted but I am doing them now. I wanted to learn Japanese and learn how to play the piano and ukulele. I am so lucky.hehe In fact, I have really wanted to do one thing sunce when I was young. I really want to go to amusement park in USA which is disney land. I cant ride rides for now but still I want to go there. I have good image of disney land. I think that I would feel like I am in the fairy tale.*^^*

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

I was simply smiling when I was reading your composition.

It seems like you went back as a child.

Well, as they say, they is always a child in us. kkk

I do hope that you can go to Disneyland as soon as possible so that you can enjoy more. haha.

Good lcuk on that one. hehe

Thanks for today!

See you tomorrow!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


What is something that you\'ve always wanted to do but you haven\'t done until now?

There were things that I really wanted but I am doing them now.

>> correct!
 I wanted to learn Japanese and learn how to play the piano and ukulele.

>> correct! 
 I am so lucky.hehe

>> correct! 
 In fact, I have really wanted to do one thing sunce when I was young.

>> correct! (since)
 I really want to go to amusement park in USA which is disney land.

>>  I really want to go to an amusement park in USA which is Disneyland. 

>> or: I really want to go to Disneyland in USA.
 I cant ride rides for now but still I want to go there.

>> I could not try the rides now but I still want to go there,
 I have good image of disney land.

>> correct!

 I think that I would feel like I am in the fairy tale.*^^*

>> correct!

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